The losses
were not meant
to be counted,
the heart beats
involuntary
till it does,
the beats skipped
do not
add to life,
unless missed
in tandem
with another one’s.
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Vidur
16Jan17
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VerseInEmotion 
Vidur– I always leave your poetry feeling a little more wistful, a little sadder and filled with longing. I like that it makes me feel but wow!
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I am going to say – thank you, for the ‘wow’ you put in the end 🙂 and thank you so much for reading and giving your view, that’s what makes it more than the words it is!
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Always enjoy reading you!
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🙂
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Perhaps. But they never subtract from life — only add; there’s no such thing as “negative” life, or “minus” life. For you:
(https://newsnotes1.wordpress.com/2017/01/15/blogger-recognition-award-2/)
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Yes, that is true….good or bad, experiences only add.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you, Maureen!
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Very welcome Vidur!
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love this one
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Thank you!!!
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your welcome
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I work in cardiology btw ..random thought
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Oh wow…you deal with the all the real stuff! 🙂
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yup- real hearts and stuff
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We need so many more of you in the world !!!
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Wow that is a very nice thing to say 😊
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Its true!
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❤😊
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