Sitting
by the shore
watching
footsteps
walk by,
some feet
linger longer
deepening craters
as waters
recede,
impressions
of a moment
lived
in this time
this place,
And I wonder,
does
the sand beneath
feel
the happy ones
from the sad,
the difference
between those
that are good
and those
labeled bad,
the weight
of those
that are rich
and of those
that aren’t,
Thoughts
interrupted,
by a
thoughtless wave,
which
for my questions,
doesn’t seem
to care,
it fills up
all the holes,
equally,
and as it recedes,
in the evenness
of what
it leaves behind,
I suddenly find
all the answers
bared.
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Vidur
21Feb17
Beautifully philosophical
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Thank you, Yasmin ☺️
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This is fabulous Vidur. Beautiful and thoughtful.
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Thank you so much Christine!
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Reblogged this on Secret First Draft: A Site of the Sudden Denouement Literary Collective and commented:
Introducing Vidur Sahdev of Verse in Motion
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Thank you. Appreciate your gesture!
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Its a great piece
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Very nice, in metaphor and in life. Strange as it all is, I think the land also absorbs to the vibrations of its cultures. I think I’ve made mention of it, here or there, but it’s one of my Wild Theories (I think I still need to write it up).
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Thank you! I am sure it does. It would make a good good read in your words.
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Thanks! I’m actually not the only one who ever thought so. Queen Helena of Constantinople marked out what she thought were sites significant to Christianity in Israel by the same process — feeling the aura of the past, in the atmosphere and walking the ground to feel it.
And, yes — poetry books by you would be wonderful!
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Thank you, Rachel!
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!!! what can I even say?!!! How? I just want to know how?! each one flows just as it was meant!! A book please just the size to fit nicely in my hands…your writing Vidur is a dream. I could imagine falling asleep with it in my mind and dreaming the sweetest most poetic dreams ever!
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Thank you, Maureen! The words flow coz you read them so. But, it’s such a wonderful feeling for me, when you give credit to the words 😊
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You express your thoughts in my eyes like no other it is pure and beautiful Vidur Im hooked! 🙂 ❤
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☺️💙
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Had to read it twice, my mind floating in space and the second time a certain breakthrough. 😊💛🎶🎶 Lovely as always. Tender and sweet. 💛
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Thank you, Jeanne! 😊💙
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Absolutely!! 💛🌻
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Beautiful! Watching footsteps walk by….
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Thank you, Reena!
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