Ever seen
the rainbow,
fall from
the sky
like a coloured
cloud,
breaking into
a kaleidoscope,
of shattered
glass,
harmless
sweet
and melting,
as
cotton candy shards,
but intoxicating
as a raindrop,
touching
the tip,
of a waiting
tongue,
beautiful
in its vision,
its destruction,
with each
fallen
scattered piece,
mirroring
an aching memory,
stolen from
the empty skies,
of a
stormy heart.
———-
Vidur
21Feb17
You created such a beautiful imagery here! π
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Thank you βΊοΈ
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what an amazing write…how you collect these thoughts its just a mystery to me and a blessing to get to read π truly Vidur
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Thank you, Maureen !!! π
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Always grateful Maureen π
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As am I Vidur β€
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Wow verse.
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Thank you, Yasmin!
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A soul feeding expression! π
Beautiful
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https://somebucolichut.wordpress.com/2017/01/22/the-blissful-transience-of-bliss/
You can read a somewhat similar expression here.
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Wow!
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Nice. Let me share it….
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Thank you, Naomi!
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Really love the imagery. The picture used is also quite fitting. I love the dichotomy you bring out: things like “cotton candy” and “shards”, “coloured cloud”& “shattered glass”. And also how the experience is like a thirsty person waiting for a rain drop on their expecting tongue. π
You bring out the internal struggle by using imagery of an outside world. The memory itself is beautiful, but going back to it hurts a lot.
I also tried to bring out this dichotomy of good and bad but with reference to a collection of people rather than individuals. Talks about sacrifice for the greater good expressed through the muse of nature. Do have a look here: https://revitellect.wordpress.com/2017/02/02/the-dance-of-dead-leaves/
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