seep in through
the cracks slowly,
just enough
to fill the gaps,
like streaks of lightning
mark your presence,
in these voids
which were absent once,
broken is redundant
the world has taught,
the damaged can always
still be repaired,
the form remains
complete in shadows,
its sunlight
which bares the painful cracks,
the paradox
of what is complete,
and who completes who,
is beyond the comprehension
of a simple heart,
so seep in through
these cracks slowly,
just enough
to bridge the gaps.
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Vidur
19Jun17
“just enough to bridge the gaps”
Such a good one this is..! š
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Thank you, Tanya! š
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It’s a nice thought… Liked the last line… In real life difficult to get such a person with so much depth to understand broken is not redundant
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Thank you. Yes, in real life, it is difficult to find people like that, but I am sure there still some who would see it so.
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Maybe, maybe not… Life has become fast and shallow for most
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True!
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Oh I like this!
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This is some great stuff. I’m rereading it for the ninth time.
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Thank you!
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I love this and I love that it expresses a similar thought to the poem of mine you just liked. Glad you found it!
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Thank you so much. Yes it does…and loved reading yours!
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New blog is up.. would like you to check it out. šš
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