so,
it happened
a day before,
the air of life
was issued
to me,
a warning smile
by the beaming glow,
that though thoughts
may abound,
to keep consciously
the tongue in tow,
i promise i tried
for as long
as i could,
but you
were the test
i was ill prepared for,
the storm of thoughts
is now beyond control,
yet tongue tied
the statue stands,
pretending to hold
the advised balance still,
while in rebellion,
little words penned
in meaningful black,
slowly
sneak out beyond
these confusing controls,
disguised as waves,
ebbing away
from the stormy seas,
seeking you,
and your peaceful
shores.
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Vidur
25Jun17
Oh wow ! This is so beautifully weaved together…the words, the verses, the emotions. Fantastic piece, Vidur !
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Thank you, Chhaya. Reveling in the generosity of your words 🙂
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😊😊
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Loved reading this..! 🙂
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Thanks, Tanya. Glad you did! 🙂
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Woahh man!! Brilliant peace of writing. This blog is 💯💯💯❤.please visit my too it will be my pleasure that gr8 bloggers you visiting. But still dude you rock. 🙇🙇🙇🔥
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Thanks Anurag!
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Oh Boy! Kunal was right. You are pretty awesome.
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So humbled! Thank you.
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My pleasure. And I just noticed you’re following me. Golly!
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Yes, followed after Kunal’s post but yet to really pay a visit! Will do so soon.
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I used to have a site earlier by the name Manan Unleashed. Then I took a hiatus. Life happens, you know! Anyway, now I’m back to doing what I love doing best.
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Oh wow! Yes life happens 🙂 Happy writing, and a pleasure to connect!
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❤️ ❤️ ❤️
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Thank you!
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Powerful
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Thank you, Shraddha!
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