I open my palm,
to let you go,
your name,
you didn’t find,
in the
lines engraved,
you believe
in the written,
i believe
in the felt,
and i guess
that is enough,
for what needs
to be said,
to the
aching heart,
which inspite
of repeatedly,
screaming out
your name,
remained unheard,
and remained unread.
© vidursahdev 2018
Beautiful, the hidden feeling…
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Thank you, EN!
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I know this.. just beautiful. 🌟🌟🌟🌟
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Thank you so much, Tara! 🙂
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I could feel this ……hits home . Brilliant as always
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Thank you, Sakshi! Glad it could connect.
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My pleasure 😊
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Thank you for reading!!! 😄
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This hits home. And hard.
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Thank you, Eric!
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This is beautiful. Just the kind of poetry I understand.
Are you a lyricist?
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Thank you! Happy you enjoyed it. No, not a lyricist as such…just write some poetry! 🙂
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Oh great. Truly glad to connect!
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My pleasure!
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🙂
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Awesome!!
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Thank you!!!
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Drop-dead gorgeous poem and ethereal to my mind… a journey of flight. Painful to read these words but beautiful as well… ✍🏼❤️ Love as a token, worn raw and bled on paper. Like this one very, very much!!
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So glad you did, J! Thank you so much, as always…for readingand the encouragement. 🙂❤️🙏
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👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼V! 🌟👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
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Thank you!!! 🙂
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Thank you, J!
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Thank you so much, J!
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Oof, breathtaking!
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Thank you, K!!! 🙂
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