Hear me
when i’m silent,
for there is
so much
that i have
to say to you,
the sun
is blessed
to make
its presence felt,
but the night
has its own way
of meaningful
conversations too,
hear me me
when i’m silent,
for there is
so much
that i need
to say to you.
© vidursahdev 2019
The use of Repetition “hear me me” enhances the beauty of the lines… it’s romance to it’s core… its love and affection to it’s core… Keep it up Vidur…
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Thank you, Ameet!!! 🙂
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Hear me when I am silent…..aha beautiful Vidur. I love those khamoshi ke unkahi batein🙂
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Thank you so much, Radhika!!! 🙂
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Lovely!
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Thanks, K!!!
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This is so romantic, Vidur. It deeply touches my heart.
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Thrilled it does! Thank you so much! 🙂
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You are welcome 😊
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Romantic ❤
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Thank you, Yasmin! 🙂
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Hear me for my silence screams and longs for you ❤️❤️………..just as I read your verse these lines came rushing 🙈
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The jist of this piece of writing actually….and the beginning of a new write for you maybe! 🙂😉
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Haa haaa see you’ve inspired me😊
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😀👍👍👍
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Your art still moves my soul. ♥
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My pleasure and an honour, as always, K! 💙
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